CH 4 P2
Oktober 18, 2021
EXPOSITION TEXT
‘In Conclusion, We Believe’
Elements of Language
1. Using the present tense such as:
I eat, Cheetah runs.
2. Using mental verbs such as: *I believe, I prefer, I agree, I doubt I disagree. *
3. Using saying verbs to support the author's argument such as people say; it is said; research indicates.
4. Using connecting words to connect the author's arguments such as additionally, furthermore, not only, also, in addition, moreover, like wise.
5. Using causal conjunctions to explain the consequences or reasons for the problem such as: because, accordingly, despite, due to, for that reason, in case, otherwise, yet, first, second.
Example:
BANNING OF MOTORBIKES IS NECESSARY IN THE HOUSING AREAS
THESIS
Motorbikes are a nuisance and a cause for great distress. Even motorbikes or considered as the most convenient from of transportation, I think they are a hazard to humans, animals, as well as the environment. I think motorbikes should be banned in housing areas due to the following reasons: cause of unreasonable amount of noise, air pollution, diseases,and accidents.
ARGUMENT 1
First of all, I would like to point out that motorbike are major contributor to the pollution in the world. Research has shown that motorbikes emit a deadly gas that is dangerous for environment. Consequently, long-therm emission of gas from motorbikes is a major contributor of global warming (science daily).
ARGUMENT 2
Secondly, according to report from BBC News Channel, motorbikes are also responsible for causing diseases such as bronchitis, cancer, and are a major trigger of asthma and high blood pressure. Some of the diseases are so ghastly that they can kill people (BBC News ,2009).
ARGUMENT 3
Furthermore, motorbikes create so much noise. There is “Vroom Vroom” noise every where. It is extremely difficult to sleep parents with infants find it extremely challenging. The moment their babies fall a sleep, one or other motorbike passes by and the baby wakes up. It is also arduous for children to concentrate on their homework. Expert are of opinion that if there is extreme noise, It can lead to deafness and lack of concentration in children and adults (field,1993).
ARGUMENT 4
Finally motorbikes are responsible for horrible accidents. In some cases there are deaths. Motorbikes riders go so fast that they are enable to stop on time thus they and up hitting other people or animals. Many a time lot of animals are trampled and found death and road. Motorbikes are known to be the biggest killers on road (field,1993).
REITERATION
In conclusion, from the arguments above, I strongly believe that motorbikes should be banned from housing areas.
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